Monday, September 16

Flushed - Chapter 2: A New World

Ok, so here's chapter 2 of my Doctor Who/ Flushed Away mash-up. 

Flushed

A New World

Jamie coughed as he picked himself up off the cement. Still dripping and dizzy from his unexpected ride through the pipes, Jamie ran his paw through the soaked hair between his ears, pushing it back into tousled spikes. Following an echo down the tunnel he landed in, Jamie turned a corner and looked at his surroundings for the first time.

The sewer junction had been built into a miniature version of Piccadilly Square. Rats of all ages, sizes and colors shopped, worked, and lived their lives in the teeming metropolis under London’s streets. Boats made from discarded bottles and cans propelled by paddle wheels, egg beaters, and old fan blade propellers crossed the water way as rats hurried about their business. Jamie had never seen so many rats in one place before. Even before he had come to live with Reinette’s family, the pet store rarely had more than a dozen rats at one time.

Jamie was so entranced by the sight before him that he didn’t notice the food cart in his path until he collided with a tall, handsome rat with blue eyes, well groomed dark hair on his head and a long, grey military coat. 

“Careful friend, you’re pretty hot but my grill is hotter. Captain Jack Harkness, what’s your pleasure?”

Jamie jumped in surprise and embarrassment before tugging on his ear and asking for directions back topside.

“You don’t want to do that, Gorgeous” the Captain warned, “They don’t like our kind up there.”

“They like me up there just fine. I have a home and a little girl who will be heartbroken without me” Jamie responded angrily.

“Ok. Ok, I’m sure they do. I can only think of one captain brave enough to even try to take you topside. Go to the dock and look for the Bad Wolf” Jack had leaned forward across the grill while he was talking and Jamie jerked back when he noticed how close the Captain had gotten.

With a quick salute, Jamie followed Jack’s directions and headed toward the dock. As he walked away a small voice cried out: ”Don’t go, she’s crazy!” This was immediately followed by Jack’s voice loudly whispering “Hush Ianto. Silly fish.”
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After a brief run in with a rat wearing a sandwich board yelling that the royal family were werewolves, Jamie finally made it to the docks. He hadn’t gone far when he spotted the Bad Wolf. She was a fairly small vessel, made from an old metal washtub with half a tire tread making up the stern. Jamie couldn’t see anyone moving around above deck, so he climbed aboard calling out as he did.

As he explored, Jamie couldn’t help but feel as though he was being followed but didn’t see anyone when he turned to look. He felt a tap on his shoulder before being grabbed and lifted into the air by a large mechanical hand and dangled over the side of the boat.

Golden fur and amused brown eyes met his as a lovely rat wearing jeans and a Union Jack shirt climbed aboard the Bad Wolf.

“I said: who are you, and what are you doin’ on my ship” she repeated. Jamie had been so taken aback by her appearance that he had forgotten what he had planned to say entirely. At a motion from the blonde, the hand gently set Jamie back on the deck.

“My name is Jamie; James McCrimmon. I was looking for the Bad Wolf” he finally managed to reply, brushing off his still damp suit as he did. “Captain Jack Harkness said this was the only boat that could take me topside. I need to get home to Gallifrey; that’s my house in Kensington. It’s very important that I get back . . . “

“Well you found the Bad Wolf, Mate. I’m Rose. This is my boat. I don’t like having strangers make themselves at home without my permission. You can find a different captain, I can’t take you topside right now, I’m a bit busy.” As she turned, unhooked the ropes holding the boat to the dock and walked toward the wheel, Jamie stared in shock. With dawning horror, he realized that she was preparing to leave. He had to convince her to take him home!

Rose had started the engine, looking pointedly from Jamie to the dock with an annoyed expression when two rats jumped from electric mixers onto the deck, glaring menacingly.

“Thought you’d get away, didn’t ya Rose” the smaller rat taunted. His dark grey suit had black dots running down the legs and a shiny blue button pinned to his pocket. “Stealin’ from Rassilon wasn’t very smart, now was it?”

“Your boss stole it from me first! My dad broke every bone in his body to get that white point star” Rose yelled. Taking a breath and coming to stand in front of Jamie, she continued more calmly. “And it don’t matter anyway. It’s gone. Rassilon can’t have it ‘cause I don’t have it anymore.”

The smaller rat yelled to his large, albino counterpart “Grab her Thay. Rassilon is gonna wanna . . . talk to her.” As Rose struggled to free herself from Thay’s grip, Jamie noticed a bulge in her back pocket.

Figuring that he could at least get himself out of the mess he’d found himself in, Jamie called out “Did you notice her bum?”  Thay turned an offended eye on Jamie, while Rose glared daggers and shook her head in the hopes that he would stop speaking. The rat in the dark suit seemed to notice Jamie for the first time, turning to loom threateningly “Thay, turn her around” he shouted, still glaring at Jamie.

“But Sec,” Thay started “it’s not good manners to talk about someone’s bum. Not in front of them at least. What would your mother say!”

“Just do it” Sec yelled, staring hard at his cohort.  Thay lifted the still struggling Rose off her feet, turning her toward his broad chest, revealing the cut edge of a large white diamond peeking out of her back pocket. “Oh, you shouldn’t have tried to hide that from us, Rose” Sec gloated. Rassilon is gonna exterminate you for that.” Thay turned Rose upside down, shaking her until the gem fell from her pocket and threw her over his shoulder.

Glancing back at Jamie he asked “What do you want to do with him, Sec?” Hearing Sec tell him to “bring him along, too” Thay grabbed Jamie and threw him over his other shoulder before following Sec off the boat.

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